Are You on a Train Headed for Nowhere?

Train to Nowhere Cover

Today I have another book that is kind of hard for me to review, not in a bad way, mind you..but so much to absorb and to find the right words to give it justice. Today’s review is a book by Gloria Piper, “Train to Nowhere.”

Have you ever rode a train before? There are usually several stops as passengers disembark for their different destinations. Now think of a train where no one gets off, there are no stops, no destination in sight. That is because this train is in the distant future and it is not a mode of transportation, but a world. This is a world made up of three castes: The Orphans, The Landed, and the Nomads; where only the Orphans and Landed reside. The Nomads are on the Outside.

The Orphans, or illegally born, may only occupy the lower deck while the Landed and Admin occupy the upper decks.They are not allowed in the upper deck of the Landed, but the Landed visit and watch their performances. Admin is the group that rules the train, and use a form of mind control domination through wrist computers, or wristcomps, that are worn by every Orphan. It is manned by a computerized adviser, Mentor.

It begins a little slow, describing the world of the Orphans through one of the main characters, Garland, a musician and dancer. Garland longs to be adopted and allowed to live with the Landed on the upper deck. The Landed are an Amish type. His dream is being free. More than even the upper deck, he would like to be on the Outside, free of the train altogether.

The second main character, Hedge, is the total opposite of Garland. He too, is a performer, but he is willing to step on anyone to get ahead, and does. He is talented and loved by the audience, which saves him on numerous occasions. He is a member of the Landed. When they each experience the other’s world, it is a culture shock for both of them.

I thought the premise of this story was great. The interactions between the characters worked well. The characters were developed and it was a good story. The problem I had was a lot of the terminology. Everything on the Orphan side was computer talk that sometimes was a bit over the top. It sometimes detracted from the story, but other than that, I did quite like it. It is a totally different genre than what I would normally read, but I enjoyed it. Yet, at the same time I was disturbed by the thought of this really happening in our future. It does give you food for thought.

Disclosure of Material Connection: I received a digital copy of this book free from the author. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”

Have you read a good book lately that you would care to share? Please comment. I would love to hear from you!

If You Like To Be Scared…

Blacxkbrooke Happy New Year! Welcome to my first review for 2013! Do you like to be scared? Are you a mystery, suspense, thriller or horror lover? I know I am! This review is for Emma Silver’s debut Young Adult novel, Blackbrooke, Book 1 of a trilogy. Here is the synopisis of the story:

Blackbrooke is a tourist town that draws “Outsiders” in because their residents are not all human. Tourists are attracted to the other residents, the creatures that come out at night. These creatures, called “Crits”, are monsters that roam the streets at night searching for food. For their safety, the humans must follow the Rules. These Rules entail the human residents to deny certain basic desires that are forbidden for those under the age of 18. All residents must lock their doors at dusk and pull their shades, locking themselves in until daylight. The most important Rule is not to go out at night. This is considered a ‘walk out’ and is the same as committing suicide.

The protagionist of the story is Liberty Connor. She and her friends hate these Rules they are forced to live by and most of all Liberty hates the Crits. The only Rule she appreciates is the one that makes it possible to leave Blackbrooke. When she turns 18, she can leave and be free of Blackbrooke forever. She spends her time planning a new life on the Outside with her boyfriend, Gabriel. Then everything starts to go wrong. Her world falls apart as her friends start to walk out. She know something is off and is determined to find out what it is. Are the Crits what she really needs to fear or something else altogether?

I will start off by saying that this is not a genre that I normally read. Being far from being a young adult, I usually always read adult fiction. That being said, I was hopeful because I really liked the premise and, as I mentioned above, I like to be scared. This certainly fit the bill. It is quite scary and you are pulled in wanting to know what happens next. It starts off with a prologue. The first few lines were very catchy. “I was seven when I saw my first Crit.” The reader is intrigued. Ok, what is a Crit? Right away the reader understands that this is not the norm and is curious. The next line, “It was a balmy summer’s day in Blackbrooke.” Since balmy means soothing and mild, that seems to contradict the theme set by Crit and the town’s name, Blackbrooke. A foreboding premise that makes the reader pause, if just momentarily, with a shiver of anticipation. What is about to happen? Great opening! Then the author drops the ball.

Instead of a short prologue (they really should be short), it continues on with back-story. This detracts from the powerful opening. Although this is information the reader needs to know, it is given as one big chunk. It is all written in passive past tense. This being a Kindle version, did not have page numbers but location. The first page with the powerful opening was at location 92. The first dialogue that breaks up all this exposition is at location 154. That is roughly around 50-60 pages of exposition. Then it is broken up by some dialogue as Libby flashes back to her childhood and introduces her best friend, Cassius and their past. This prologue ends at location 280, with the ending of the prologue: “I was seventeen when I saw my next Crit.” Now Chapter One begins. It starts with dialogue and you are in Liberty’s present day. This is still in the passive voice but there is more action and it brings you up to date with the story.

So then, it is a problem of pacing. I am not saying the back-story wasn’t necessary or even interesting, but it was way too much! This is what is considered an information dump and it will cause many readers to stop reading. Without action, today’s reader especially, will give up. That would be a shame in this case. The part that kept pushing me forward was still there. I DID want to know what happened next. I kept reading. I am so glad I did too! Do you know why? Remember this is a trilogy..yes, you guessed it! The ending! The beginning was powerful but the ending leaves the reader with a shocking cliffhanger. It is really powerful and makes you want to get book 2 right now! You can’t though, it isn’t out yet. Drat!

Therefore, my conclusion is that even though the pacing was way off, it is a great story and I do recommend it. I know that I have to know what happens next so I will buy Book 2!

Have you read this book? If you have, let me know what you think. If not, don’t be put off by the pacing, keep reading, it is worth the $2.99 Amazon price.

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CulturalBook Groups

Hi Everyone! I hope you all had a great Christmas and are looking forward to a great new year, 2013! This is just a quick note to let everyone know that I will be Group Administrator to 2 groups on CulturalBook, as of today!  The first group is: How to Write A Great Book Review and the second, Writer’s Critique Club. It is my goal, along with members of the groups, to make each group active with lots of lively discussion. I think a free critique group is great too. That can save you a lot of money. Of course it isn’t meant to replace a great editor, but it will give you feedback before the editor sees it. For those of you who may not be familiar with CulturalBook, it is a wonderful social network site for those engaged in culture, the arts, humanities, literature and life. Members include book lovers, poets, novelists— from hobbyists to celebrities—in short, a website for intelligent, interesting people with interesting things to say–like YOU! 🙂 Please visit CulturalBook and visit or join the groups..comment, critique..come and be a part of our growing community! If you have any questions you can comment here of course, visit the groups, or if you prefer to send a private message contact me by email at: becky@rebeccavance.com. 

Thank you for visiting my blog and hope to see you at CulturalBook as well. Best wishes for 2013!!

Merry Christmas! Last Review Before the New Year

Masks of the Lost Kings
Merry Christmas! Santa is on his way so I hope you’ve all been good and you get everything you want! This will be the last post of 2012, but never fear, I’ll be back with more reviews in January and more authors interviews. If there is any other content that you would like to see or have comments, I would love to hear from you.

Today’s review is Masks of the Lost Kings by Tom Bane. The author comes from a scientific background and that is apparent from his description which appears to be very well researched.

This is an action/adventure which has been compared to Indiana Jones and the Da Vinci Code. The main character, Suzy da Silva is an archaeologist working on a thesis that compares the ancient Egyptian history to Christianity. Unable to be funded by Oxford University, her professor Dr. Logan arranges for her to speak to the mysterious Horus Corporation. She is soon traveling to Egypt. She manages to get inside the Great Pyramid where she witnesses a murder and flees in fear for her life. She travels to the Valley of Kings to see the tomb of the boy king, Tutankhamen. She is convinced that she will find the proof she seeks there. She is joined by Tom Brooking, a talented astrophysicist. Together they discover secrets that some would kill to acquire. They are chased by assassins and others that are either trying to protect them or kill them as well.

This is a thriller, adventure and mystery all rolled into one. I admire those authors that have a gift for description, and this story’s strength is the description. The story is a great premise and although I would have liked to see a little more characterization, I really didn’t have an issue with the characters. The distraction to me was the pacing. It started well with a jungle scene, but when it gets to Suzy and the lead-in to her Egypt adventure, the action drops while through lectures and narration, the reader is given a lot of scientific information. While I found it interesting it felt too technical to me. I found myself glossing over all the technical information to get to the action, which it took many pages to get to. Once it did however, the action was riveting. I think that anyone interested in Egyptology or adventure/thriller would very much enjoy this book. I would recommend it as it is a very good story once the action starts happening.

I purchased this book on my own and received no compensation for my review.

I’ve Been Nominated For The Liebster Award!

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I’ve been nominated by Makaylin Felton for the coveted LIEBSTER AWARD. It may be questionable, or even dubious, for some, but I kinda like the idea. You can find out about this information trivia from at http://mckaylinfelton.wordpress.com. Visit her site and read some her posts.
Here are the rules for acceptance of the “LIEBSTER AWARD.” This is important because at the end I will be nominating eleven blogs for this coveted award.
The Rules:
When you receive the award you must post eleven random facts about yourself
You must answer eleven questions posed by the person who nominated you
You pass the award on to the eleven blogger friends you are nominating, making sure you notify them of their nominations
You write-up eleven new questions for the bloggers you are nominating (and you cannot nominate the blogger who nominated you)
You paste the award picture into your blog along with eleven random facts about yourself and your eleven questions and answers given by your nominator. (Not much different from the Next Big Thing)
Eleven Random Facts About Myself:
1. I don’t remember learning to read. My earliest memory is 4 years of age and I was reading fluently.
2. I love soap operas, especially General Hospital.
3. I discovered with this year’s election that I have a political side.
4. I am the youngest of 9 children in a blended family.
5. One of the many jobs I’ve had was working with mentally handicapped adults. I found it very satisfying.
6. I prefer mystery, suspense and horror to romance.
7. I love to travel but haven’t been anywhere for over 8 years.
8. Most plots develop in my head when I am in the shower.
9. I would love to live near the water but I live in the desert.
10. I don’t like to talk on the telephone.
11. I am a list maker and a note taker. I express my thoughts better in writing.

My Questions From Mckaylin Felton:

Q. If you could be any animal what would it be and why?
A: I would be a bird. They are free to fly whenever they wish. I am a free spirit.

Q.What is your favorite genre to read?
A. Mystery/Suspense and horror..but without the zombies! and Historical Fiction.

Q.When did you realize you wanted to become an author?
A. Deep down, I think I’ve always known, but I never realized it until college. Then, I let myself be talked out of it because it wasn’t practical. How would I pay the bills? So, I let life get in the way. Now I am retired, and with the wonderful invention of the internet, I am living my dream.

Q. If you could pick a decade to live in, what would it be and why?
A. I think around the Civil War era. It seemed so much more respectable and genteel.

Q. What is a life goal you hope to accomplish?
A. To become a published author with multiple books. I do not want to be a one book wonder.

Q. What are you most frightened of?
A. One star reviews!

Q. Which do you prefer: pen or pencil?
A. Pen, definitely. I do crosswords in ink. I don’t like to write with a pencil at all.

Q. What is your favorite movie of all time?
A. Of all time..hmmm..I would have to say Gone With the Wind. But I have many favorites.

Q. What is your favorite book?
A. Either The Stand by Stephen King or The Murder of Roger Ackroyd by Agatha Christie..it’s a tossup.

Q. Which do you prefer: independent publishing or traditional?
A. This is the toughest question of them all I think. I see the pros and cons of both. On the one hand, independent publishing is attractive because I can set my own rules and get more of the profit and it is instant. There is not that long wait to first see if someone else feels that I am worthy of publication and then if the answer is yes, the long wait to see it in print. But..you have to do all of your own promotion, hire an editor..etc. Traditional publishing is a plus because you have the validation from a professional that you’ve made it, and they do all of the footwork. I am still weighing pros and cons on this, but I am leaning toward independent and let the ones who matter the most validate my work..the readers.

Q. If you could live anywhere in the world, where would it be and why?
A. I’d love to be somewhere around the water with a moderate temperature, so maybe San Diego, CA or in my wildest dreams..Malibu.

My Questions for my Nominees:
1. What makes you stand out as a writer?
2. If you could only pick one author, living or dead, that you could spend an evening with to interview, who would you choose?
3. Where do you get your ideas?
4. Are you a pantser or an outliner. Why?
5. What is your favorite part about being an author? Your least favorite?
6. Do you have a favorite character, either your work or another author’s?
7. Do you have a particular habit or a piece of clothing, that is your lucky writing charm?
8. Do you incorporate any of your favorite things, places, or hobbies into your books?
9. What movie do you flat-out refuse to watch, no matter how good people say it is? What book do you refuse to read?
10. At what age did you begin writing?
11. Describe your ideal vacation.

My Nominees:

Robert Zimmermann
alifeamongthepages.wordpress.com
Arlee Bird
tossingitout.blogspot.com
Pam Funke
http://thefourhorsemenseries.blogspot.com
Anne Brear
http://annebrear.blogspot.com
Cheryl Kaye Tardif
http://www.cherylktardif.blogspot.com
Mark Rubinstein
markrubinstein-author.com
Jay Howard
blog.jayhoward.info
Jaye Frances
blog.jayefrances.com
Christopher Sheilds
wealdfaejournals.wordpress.com
Susan Griscom
swblog.susangriscom.com
Sean MacUisdin
http://seanmacuisdin.wordpress.com

My First Interview With Ginger Myrick

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Welcome back to Becky’s Book Notes! Wow, it’s been a while hasn’t it? Today, I have a real treat. This is my first author interview, and I am pleased to introduce Ginger Myrick, author of El Rey: A Novel of Renaissance Iberia. Thank you Ginger for being here today. I have asked Ginger a few questions and here are her responses.

1. Tell me a little about yourself; where you grew up, your life, a typical day..anything that you would care to share with your readers.

I grew up in SoCal in a very different area than where we live now. I spent my school years in a suburban middle class neighborhood where everybody wore Vans, listened to Journey and Kenny Loggins on the radio, and made the exodus to the beach on the weekends.

I have now lived in a ski resort town about 40 miles east of Los Angeles for nearly 20 years but have NEVER been skiing. I have two grown sons, a 9-year-old husband, a dog and a cat, and my mom lives two blocks away. Bits and pieces of each of them were incorporated into the characters in El Rey to some extent (except for the cat!)

A typical day goes like this: I get up around 7, have a cup of coffee while I check my profiles for messages. I walk my dog, come home and answer all of my emails until about noon, do an hour of yoga then back to some actual writing while I facebook and Twitter to promote. I walk the dog again in the evening then more writing and promo until about 7:30. Then I read to wind down (something other than my own work!) and usually get to bed between 9 and 10. The rest of my time is spent picking up after my family.

2. Have any authors influenced your writing? How?

I began reading at an early age. My grandmother was also an avid reader, and she had boxes and boxes of books in her closet. That was where I was introduced to the world of historical fiction by such authors as Anya Seton, Jean Plaidy/Victoria Holt, Ayn Rand, and Colleen McCullough. James Michener, James Clavell, and John Steinbeck came later from my father, and my elder brother got me into Stephen King. I think my writing style is probably closest to Anya Seton’s, but some of the plot elements of my stories and the way they develop are reminiscent of Colleen McCullough. I would feel extremely honored to be likened to any of them!

3. I understand that you write historical fiction. Is this also what you prefer to read, or do you read a different genre in your spare time?

It is my preferred genre, but I can find something to love in almost any book. I read fantasy, sci-fi, dystopian, straight historicals, biographies. I am an absolute freak when it comes to Stephen King. I have only read a couple of stories by him that I didn’t love. But I think the real key is the storytelling and the talent for making a reader feel connected to the characters, no matter the genre. Those are the books I love to find. They help me escape from me!

4. What is your favorite part about being an author? Your least favorite part?

My favorite part it the telling of the tale. I love the idea of putting the same old everyday words together to create something unique and my very own. I also love the research. I have found that I adore learning new things. It’s part of why I could never decide what path I wanted to follow when I was in school. If I could have made a career out of being a student, I would have done that.

But I detest the marketing and promotion part of it. I am reclusive by nature and don’t find myself very interesting, so trying to convince others that they should be interested in what I have to say is beyond me. And finding a balance between obnoxious and just right is extremely difficult. I always feel I come off as pushy. I’m still learning.

5. If given the opportunity to sit down and talk to your favorite author, what would you ask him/her? How would you answer it?

Hmm … this is a great question, Becky, and I had to think about it a long time. I actually left it for last, and I’m still mulling it over as I answer. It is between Jean Plaidy, whose real name was Eleanor Hibbert, Ayn Rand, and Colleen McCullough. I’m not sure the questions I would ask would be writing related.

The first two have passed away but led very different lives. I suppose I would ask Ms. Hibbert how she managed her research. Back then it would have been a very daunting prospect to have to physically go to her resources as opposed to just summoning them on the computer. With Ayn Rand I would just like to hear her talk about her experiences. She led an extraordinary and somewhat charmed life, although she became obsessed with her Objectivism philosophy in her final years. And I would like to just sit down and have a female bonding session with Colleen McCullough. She has like four degrees in very dissimilar areas, even a PhD in neuroscience. But despite having such a brilliant mind, she seems to be such an earthy, unpretentious sort of woman.

And although I would be flattered beyond giddy if anyone would like to do the same thing with me, I would probably have to wake her up after about 10 minutes so boring is my life!

6. At what age did you start writing and when did you decide on writing as a career choice?

I have written poetry, songs, and short stories my entire life but never aspired to anything grander. I began writing El Rey on November 29, 2009 (I was 44 at the time) and there was actually no choice in the matter. I call the whole thing a Divine Inspiration. Even now when I write, I still feel that I am merely the instrument, and I have yet to figure out where it is all going.

As far as the career part of it … well, all I can say is that I’m fortunate that my husband has a good job and doesn’t depend on me to contribute. Some other writers whom I have met are actually trying to pay their bills or quit a second or third job. I don’t know how they do it and admire them for their tenacity. I think that sort of pressure would take the pleasure right out of it for me.

7. Do you incorporate any of your favorite things, places, or hobbies into your books?

I always use my own interests in my writing. The singing, cooking, horses, dogs, interest in plants, needlework, are all things that I love. I have never been to any of the places except on the internet, so all of that was purely elaboration upon wishful thinking. But I did use the pictures as a starting point to describe the locations. I find that if I write what I know, I convey it convincingly.

8. What movie (if any) do you flat out refuse to watch no matter how good people say it is? What book do you refuse to read? Why?

I don’t like to watch movies that are too teeny bopper, like the Twilight series. Ditto for the books. I did venture to watch The Hunger Games but was left unimpressed. I thought they tried to make it too grandiose for what it was. I much prefer The Running Man (again Stephen King.) I also have trouble with time travel and highlander romances. Something about the time travel is never quite convincing enough, and the highlander books just seem forced. I don’t like anything with graphic or gratuitous sex in it, so 50 Shades of Gray is also out. I cannot read Tom Clancy, but his books make fantastic movies!

9. Do you have a favorite character either from your own work or another author’s?

This is also a tough question. So many to choose from! I really love Iñigo from El Rey. He represents the ideal father, something I never really had. The largest part of him comes from my grandfather, and he also has attributes of an uncle who was very dear to me with hints of my two brothers. Now that I think about it, he is also very much like Atticus Finch from To Kill A Mockingbird, whom I also adore.

10. Tell us a little about your most recent protagonist.

I released my second novel at the beginning of November. It is titled The Welsh Healer and is about a young girl who is forced from her childhood home by the Welsh uprising against England in 1400. She is endowed with a mystical healing gift passed down through an ancient line of healers. She has been told her entire life that she is the fulfillment of a prophecy and destined to preserve the bloodline of kings. The character was largely based on a new friend, Arleigh Johnson, who runs Historical-Fiction.com. Her picture is even on the cover.

11. What is the setting of your current work in progress and when can we expect to see it?

My WIP is set in Manhattan during the Gilded Age (1874.) It’s about a girl who emigrated from Ireland and works for a well-to-do lady in a fancy neighborhood. It is a Pygmalion/My Fair Lady type of story with a twist. I hope to have it done at the end of January or February 2013.

Thank you again for being here Ginger.

Have you read a book that seemed to stand out in your mind, long after the book had ended? The debut novel by Ginger Myrick, El Rey: A Novel of Renaissance Iberia, did that for me. I found myself wondering about the characters long after the end.

Set in 16th century Portugal and Spain, El Rey is rich in characters that will touch your heart, with the core as a love story between Inez Garcia and El Rey. Inez is an outspoken daughter of a wealthy merchant and El Rey the sea captain and nephew of the King of Portugal. It begins with the story of Inez as an elderly woman telling her great-granddaughter the story of herself from a child of 11 to adulthood and of El Rey. They meet at a party in his honor and strike up a friendship. Inez vows that she will never love another and El Rey tells her he will one day ask for her hand in marriage.

This is a sweeping saga of the story of her mother, Joanna, her father, Inigo, and others that are important in her life. Interwoven in the main body of the work are four narratives that move Inez’s story.

As a historical fiction reader and writer, I can appreciate the amount of research in this novel and it is meticulously accurate and even more important, not preachy. It is interwoven seamlessly into the story. The first impression I had however, and it continued throughout, was the author’s use of imagery. The reader is there, they can smell the sea, hear the seagulls. I consider her very masterful with description. I don’t want to give too much away because my words could not substitute for reading this book. I highly recommend it. I rarely give a 5 star review, but I would rate this up there with the masters of this genre.

Have you read a good book lately? Please share your thoughts. I appreciate all comments and would like to hear yours. 🙂

One of the Most Unique Books I’ve Read in Ages

Have you ever read a book that surprised you? Maybe you didn’t expect to like it and you did, or expected to and didn’t? That can work either way. Maybe the description makes you have a certain expectation, and you find something else? This review is one of those kind. This is “Whorticulture” by Marie-Anne Mancio. I received a complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review. This consideration has no bearing upon my review in any way.

I was at once intrigued by the title. I assumed it would be about prostitution, but I wasn’t sure where the rest fit in. It starts with a child wondering when her father will return. All she has of him is a faded and creased letter. It is followed by the stories of 4 women in the antebellum era. The reader is introduced to Katharine, a young woman who while being educated into being a lady, due to circumstances, gets more of an education than she bargained for; Abigail, a young lady that falls for a thief; Seraphine, a young mulatto woman, who is a prostitute and wants to reinvent herself; and Emily, an abused wife stranded on a large sugar plantation.

These women’s stories are like four short stories and although each are unaware of one another, their lives intertwine. The chapters are designated with flowers. The author supplies the reader with a flower reference, and tells us that each flower has a certain meaning. This all correlates with each individual and their personality. This is a very different concept and very ingenious way of showing the personality of each woman. It is peopled with all types of characters; you have gamblers, whores, liars, abusers; all living in a era that today’s readers want to know more about.

To be honest, I found myself a bit lost in some parts. I expected the flowers to be mentioned more within the stories because the chapter heading included them. Maybe if I had read it in one sitting I would have not have felt this way, I had to go back and forth and wondered how it fit together. Due to this, about halfway through I wasn’t sure how I liked it. Now, here comes the surprise I mentioned. I kept reading and saw how each interacted and I found that I wanted to know more. I thought it was so original an idea, that I found I really did like it after all. I recommend it if you want to read something different and unique and want to be taken somewhere you have never been before. After all, isn’t that why we read fiction in the first place?

Let Me Ask Your Opinion…

Hi Friends!! As many of you know, I am reading and reading, but I am plowed under, so please bear with me. I will get to all the reviews. In the meantime, I realize that I haven’t been posting on a consistent basis, and for that I apologize. I have been pondering an idea for this blog, and I would like to throw it out here to you and, as the headline states, ask your opinion.

I know that many of you are not only readers, but also writers. So, I have been wondering about doing author interviews as well as the reviews. This not only provides more material for blogging purposes, but it gives the reader a little background about the author. So, reader and author alike, is this something that you would like to see on here?

A question to the writers: Would you be interested in being interviewed on this blog? If so, what questions would you like to answer for your readers? I am new at this, so any help in that area would be greatly appreciated!

I seriously want to hear from you all on your opinion on this as well as any other suggestions that you may have for what I can do to improve the blog. This is not for me, but for you, so I value your input. 🙂

Right Now~~A Short Story Review

Well, it appears that I must start out with another apology. It has been quite a while since my last post. Since I am still reading on my longer books for review, I am stopping to review on another short story. This is from a talented writer, Sarah Baethge, and the story is “Right Now.” 

This story is written in first person by a young woman named Lily Aldern. She finds herself between jobs and is hired as a secretary at her brother’s detective agency. He is one of a two man partnership at C & A Detective Agency. The company is investigating suspicious activity at an aerospace company, Legacy Towers. The team comes across a strange man, Joe, and it appears that all of his past memory has been wiped clean, yet he has an uncanny knack for predicting little snippets of the future. Exactly what kind of experimentation is going on at Legacy Towers?

The tone and voice are unique and for the most part believable. The interaction between Lily and the other 3 characters create a hint of comic relief to the story. The wonderful thing about science fiction is the many facets it can take, so many possibilities. I think this could be a great story if it was expanded upon. The characters needed to be more developed. The reader learns a little bit about Lily, and a little bit about Joe, but her brother and his partner, who have some major story line, are just there, much like a prop, and the reader is left wondering about them. This story ends abruptly, and leaves me to wonder if there is going to be a sequel, but it wasn’t hinted that there would be more. I really do like the premise of this story and I am left wanting more. I would love to see this expanded to at least a longer story, but it has great possibilities for a novella or even a novel. I would definitely like to see more from this writer, and would read this again with an expansion or if a sequel is coming, I would like to see that.